(Chorus)
Your presence lingers in my blood
Every breath I take,
Implants your aura in me
You are here to stay within me
Even when you are gone
My wounds are sodden in blood,
Embalmed in pain,Naked
The pain torments my soul
Scattering my sanity
Time can never heal
All that you gave
It will remain in my realms
Your love,your presence
(Chorus)
Your presence lingers in my blood
Every breath I take,
Implants your aura in me
You are here to stay within me
Even when you are gone
I walked by your side
Kissing away every morsel of pain
Every tear that fell from your eye
Shattered my strength
I held you close to me
Never letting you fail
And you have every inch of me
Then and now
Your face chases my dreams
Enslaved in your love,I live
Even then I want to see you again
Sometime again
Your voice resonates in my ears
Tearing me into shreds
Even then I want to hear you again
All over again
It's impossible to let myself know
That you are not here anymore
I walk along the boulevard of broken dreams
Picking up the tattered pieces of our love
I walk along the forsaken land,Orphaned
(Chorus)
Your presence lingers in my blood
Every breath I take,
Implants your aura in me
You are here to stay within me
Even when you are gone
16th "March" 2009
"You are here to stay,always"
© 2006-2009 Rinzu Susan Rajan
Author notes
INSPIRED BY THE SONG "MY IMMORTAL" BY EVANESCENCE
A contest entry
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Comments
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Wow, a song entry! I'm surprised. I didn't think I'd see that here.
I do like this song...it's just sad that I'll never be able to hear it. I'm sure I would love it, if I ever heard its' actual tune.
Well, you get some creativity points here
Great job. Thank you for entering.
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this is good
and different from the others because this could almost become a song with the chorus and all. nice write. -
Im not sure how to judge this, being i just read this less than a month ago and commented it.
but good luck.
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I love Amy Lee...I'd pick her over and other chick singer.
This was wonderful.
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mk babe i only ask 4 one thing. can u put where the chorus is. and the artist of ze song? then ill judge it.
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Thanks for entering
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Thank you poet for entering my contest:
PREWRITES FOR BRONZE...
Wishing you the best...
till then
stay
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This is really good, but it was not what I'm looking for.... sorry I was looking for poetry about music, not lyrics.
This was still an amazing write, thank you for giving me the privilige of reading it
Thanks for entering
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Well done I love this
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I may be in my 40's but appreciate good music such as the group you depicted your poem with. Beautifully crafted write, we all have felt that some where along the way. Blessings.
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That was really beautiful and I can personally say that I can relate to it. That is wonderful imagery in this. Its amazing. Nice work and thanks for entering it. Keep up the good work.
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Wow This Is Great. Thanks For Entering.
'enslaved in your love'
Great
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i love your line "boulivard of broken dreams" has such great imagery. great work on this.
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This is an excellent poem. It really captured my attention.
Favorite lines:
"My wounds are sodden in blood,
Embalmed in pain,Naked
The pain torments my soul
Scattering my sanity
Time can never heal
All that you gave
It will remain in my realms
Your love,your presence"
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• if you would please space your name out in your AN like this : X x D r o w n . M e . D r y X x . Just out a space between each of your letters. Please. If you chose not to thats fine but i would like you you give me a reason. Thank you for putting your username in you’re an but I need it spaced as previously specified.
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The lyrics were very emotional and touching. I've felt this pain many times. It was really brought to life in your poem/song. Thank you for entering my contest.
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I am Very Lyricaly Challenged....I couldn't write a song to save my life. But apparently you can. This is a beautiful and touching set of lyrics.
I walk along the boulevard of broken dreams
Picking up the tattered pieces of our love
I walk along the forsaken land,Orphaned
Wow Just Wow. I'm breathless. Bravo.
Thanks For Entering My Contest.
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Beautiful, good luck in the contest!
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Great work.
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Very nice poem. Sounds lyrical.
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this describes the song sooo well.. beautiful write.
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Wonderful :D
This Is Just Tha Kind Of Image I Wanted To See XD Very Good Write, I Can Feel Each Raw Emotion And It Fits Well With Tha Song. Tha Word "Presence" Might Have Been A Little Over Used But It Didn't Seem To Take Away From Tha Over All Feel. Great Job And Good Luck! I'll Be Reading Over It Again When Tha End Of Tha Contest Comes Closer. Thanks Again For Entering.
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Very painful write.
You captured the essence of the song beautifully. I love every emotion.
Good luck in the contest!
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