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I Love You.

Writing  you poems line after line

wishing I could have you, wishing you were mine.

 

 

If only you'd change your mind

for my future looks blind.

 

 

I want you in my life, and to stay forever

There will never be a time I'll hate you, no never.

 

 

Talking to you for hours all night,

hoping your ok, hoping your alright.

 

 

I really want to hug you, hold you so tight

I want you with me, I'll try all I might.

 

 

There is no one else out there, that is quite like you.

the way you make me happy, with all the things you do.

 

 

All I really want, is you right here.

but instead every night I shed a tear.

 

I wish you could love me, it would mean so much

Walking with you and your hand that I want to clutch.

 

Waking up in the morning, your in my head

thinking of all things I should of said.

 

Why cant you say, that you love me back

because all this confusion its making me go off track.

 

You are special to me and I wont let you go,

I wont stop loving you, I'll let it show.

 

I felt like writing this just for you,

even thought most my chances are already blew.

 

I really cant have you, and I know that for sure

but I cant go through this pain I have to endure.

 

 

I'm trying to tell myself, this just isn't how you feel

you don't love me and I'm trying so hard to heal.

 

 

I love you I really do, and I'll keep saying it.

If only you'd love me just one little bit.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Author notes

*one-sided love

To the one I love.

A contest entry

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  • storiesuntold gold member
    September 6
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    This one is more for older people

    Its a good write though


  • jackreed3 gold member
    June 27
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    Lots of emotions. simple I love this write.. Its Great..
    Your friend in poetry.. JackReed3..


  • Fallen-Muse
    June 19

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    Liked it

    I liked this it was very sweet. Keep up the good work and thank you so much for your entry. Good luck!!!

  • I love the flow and the message is strong too. It really tuched me. Good job.

  • Amen,..what a beautiful heart you have here with the smiles of the love around..wonderful flow and the beautiful subject you dealt here my friend..well done...

  • AWWW.. that's a beautiful poem.
    well written


  • Misunderstood
    April 30
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    sorry have to remove your poem but it a prewrite sorry ..but this is a great poem


  • Aelten
    April 8

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    This is very heartfelt I like the way you have set it in couplets. Im impressed my dear
    Best wishes with your love~
    Khia

  • how very sad. to love someone who doesn't love you back is heartbreaking. i wish you well in this love and in these contests that you have entered. viyanna rosemarie


  • Reanna Eryn
    April 6

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    Love is quite confusing...this poem clearly states that. This flows rather nice. I can feel the pain you do. I loved ever thing I read here...Keep reading.


  • hyper thing
    April 3
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    hey you entered my contest thanks

  • this is a great poem and i know exactly how it feels to love someone who cant or wont love you back. good job

  • if they dont love u it was never meant to be

    like i say
    if you love something let it go
    if it comes back its yours forever
    if it doesnt it was never ment to be.

    hang in there.

  • Well this is the story of the love..one can relate with it..very thoughtful narration you shared well done..and thanks for sharing..

  • wow!!!!!!!! I feel the emotion
    Good job


  • A dEaD dReAm
    March 24

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    amazing poem i love the emotion...and the story behind it...great flow and rhyming love it great jobb.im katelynn byt he way

  • nice poem! awww it was so sweet...
    but aggravating at the same time bcuz the one ya love doesnt love ya back.... i know that feeling all too well! =/
    anyways, great poem! i loved all the rhymes in it
    I loved your poem! good luck in the contests,
    hugggglezzzzzzzz,
    -adria


  • Jeremy0826 silver member
    March 21

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    Great emotions and rhyme in this poem.
    Thanks a lot for sharing it and good luck to you
    in all of these contests! Take care!




    Jeremy0826

  • this is me and btw good poem


  • rinzurajan
    March 16

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    i loved it...more so coz i completely relate to it...i wish i could have written such a piece for my guy...so full of love and devotion...

    some suggetions...

    in sixth line u can change it to my might instead of i might...

    in seventeenth line it must be you're and not you are...
    in eighteenth line u can change it to i should have said instead of i should of said...

    rest is great...just some suggestions...

    Good luck


  • Crazy Diamond
    March 15
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    awww this is beautiful
    keep the pen goin


  • Firequeen
    March 14

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    i know this feeling all to well
    you penned your feelings beautifuly
    thank you for sharing.
    keep the ink flowing


  • Arkbear gold member
    March 11
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    ....love to see this left-aligned

  • Arkbear gold member
    March 11

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    Hello

    Place a space after your very first word, *writing*

    *hoping you('re) okay....hoping you('re) alright -

    (it's) making me.....-

    *won(')t -

    *but I can(')t ...-

    Nice work here....just a few areas of editing needed....lots of emotion here....lasting impression is a tad weak, but still showed strength all the way throughout your write -

    Good luck with your entry in the contests, & thanks for sharing with the group

    Bear -


  • VooDoo Child
    March 11
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    i like reading poems i can relate 2 & i like this one.


  • Kwalk
    March 10
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    aww i love this. it's amazing. it's how i feel too.


  • queen-country
    March 10
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    wow
    this is so good
    i know how you feel


  • ForeverRenee
    March 9
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    oh wow, this is amazing..
    keep up the amazing work
    !~Renee~!


  • k.a.s.s.i.e
    March 9

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    i liked everything about this poem. the rhyme, the emotion, the words themselves. it's great!
    keep it up

    kAsSiE

  • LookAway
    March 9
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    I Feel that exact same way. Great job.


  • BrokenSanity
    March 8

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    Okay, this is well written but it looses the flow at times, which is distracting. Who is this for? Amy?


  • Katrina Repp
    March 8
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    wow

    thats sad, but sweet at the same time. great poem!

  • Awww

    Very sad but very well written. A few spelling mistakes and you put a double look in the 4th line. But this is a very heartfelt poem with lots of good emotion shining through your words. Thanks for sharing : )

  • oh, don't give up. You can be loved, who knows, maybe this person loves you back.


    Just don't give up, that day will come.

  • this is amazing huni i can feel so much emotion through it excellent write! keep it up babes take care xoxox

  • awwww
    This was a great write! The flow was excellent and so were the rhymes. This part of the poem stuck out to me:

    "Waking up in the morning, your in my head
    thinking of all things I should of said."
    I used to wake up every day and feel exactly this way. Hey that rhymed
    Wonderful and sad
    ~Kera

  • wow..this is an amazing write!keep it up sis

  • Awwwww!!!!

    Love, is really something amazing to feel only if the one you love loves you back...go get em gurl, I blew my chances..I'm rooting 4 you

  • awwww i hope the person you love reads this and realizes how great of a person you really are and what they're missing out on. great poem (loved the rhyme) and emotion


  • xkadiex
    March 8

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    is this for amy? aww i loved it, so much emotion all writen down, i think its great, well dont

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