Jacob:
I penetrated her between her legs
she breaks into moan
with tears and blood flow
I penetrated her eyes
she shuts her eyes
and shattered my images into pieces
I penetrated her heart
and never withdrew
for it was between her chest and her legs
i found sanctuary
but it was in her heart i found truest of love
fragile virgin
if i crush your heart
then i wil be dust
woman:
In my pain i bear your pleasure
In my eyes i bear your weight
In my heart i bear your life
but if you crush my heart
you will be dust and i will be nothing
Oh make love to my soul!
for it is virgin
for it is bleeding
Please tell me what you think
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There is something so womblike about this write...the man finding sanctuary and truest love as if from a mother and the woman bearing all asking only to be loved to her very soul...I love your writing Carolina...so full of life's pain, which is as sweet in your writing as life's pleasures...I will read this again and again as I do so many of your writes, my friend...Peace and love, Rhonda
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Thank you so much Rhonda, i appreciate your comment alot. May peace be with you too.
love,
carol
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Great
This is simply great, this is how an innocent and soft hearted girl may think about herself. this is a deep expression of pain but at the same time of love and of purity. thanks for sharing
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I really like this poem. It says a lot. I especially like Oh make love to my soul!
for it is virgin
for it is bleeding
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thank you. glad you liked it. cheers.
x,
carol
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A thought provoking adult piece.
For to love a woman - virgin or not - is to lover her heart and soul - as well as the sweet and sensual charms of her body - and all the pleasure that she is willing to give to you - as you give her bliss and joy - as well.
Love & Peace!
Earl.
I enjoyed this piece and will be back to look at more as time goes by.
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for all those who believe in love and the same time believe it will never hapen
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