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Son & Father

A father adoring eyes

Expressions of love

Kindness and compassion

A father mentoring

patience and understanding

strength and courage

A father who is fun

laughs and runs

plays with his son

A father who listens

meek and mild

open-minded and moral

Be proud father

Your son is a scholar

And an agile athlete

Be proud father

Your son is a vision of you

who will carry your traits

Be proud father

Your son shows your heart

soul and spirit

Be proud father

Your son an incredible young man

the world is in his hands

Be proud father

Your son has a dream

he is a miracle of you

Heather Mirassou

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  • that makes me wish i was a boy so my dad was that way lol

    it was a very good write