As I gaze into the eyes of an angel,
I dream of what can be, could be, and might be.
I get lost in the bluest ocean,
and never want to leave.
You caught my attention, and as well
you caught my heart.
With but a glance,
of your beautiful blue eyes,
I was bewitched.
A graceful beauty.
A dignifying honesty.
A beautiful soul.
A loving mind.
All portrayed with one look.
One moment of bliss.
One memory I won't forget.
Today it haunts me.
I watched you walk away,
you never knew how I felt
Never to be lost,
in eyes so blue.
No more these feelings,
feeling so true.
Author notes
'Exemplar' blue eyes(If you couldn't tell
A contest entry
- Title Prompts by Zeprina-Jaz.
700 points, ended March 8, 9 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
To whacky? It jumps around I know
Comments
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whacky? haha i like that word. Beautiful. Simply beautiful
love,
mylee -
I did ask for the title you chose to be the title of the piece, but I'll let it go this once I don't think it jumps about - the time change is effective and hard-hitting. Well written and thank you for entering.


