Why do I dare
To stare and care?
Why do I want to share
This burning flair
In my poor heart I wear?
I try to tie
Empty lie after lie,
With every single cry,
Trying to make this feeling die!
I want to learn
How to burn this love,
And love the hate,
Can’t wait.
Learn to love to hate it,
I just hate loving not to hate you.
Author notes
i tried it make it a fast moving ryhme poem. i had done a longer version but i accidenly deleted it from word. anyways, I hope you like it.
A contest entry
- You Make Me Love You. Prewrites now allowed. by Condemd RyeZing.
475 points, ended March 9, 16 entries
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that's a sad poem....but true..and cool....was it meant for someone?
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Awesome job, man! Keep up the great work and comment on my stuff sometimes, dude! Thanks for the share!
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It's good... some of the rhyming seems a little forced in places... but overall very good write. thank you for entering.
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