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Sick Kiss

I hate being sick,
How I cough and sneeze,
How I feel weak,
Taking pills and pills,
to kill this disease.

But I wouldn’t mind getting sick,
Not by one of your kisses,
Even if I faint every day of the week,
Touching your lips with mine will always be in my wishes.

I thought you were joking,
Teasing with me,
But no,
You weren’t,
I was choking,
Seriously.

But you lied,
You didn’t get me sick,
In fact I feel more alive,
Maybe with a better lick…
Yes? Another try?

Author notes

She was sick lol. Now I'm too. haha.

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  • Mr. Grey
    March 14

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    I really like this. I've been sick for days now and I know where your coming from. I've been trying really hard not to get Heroesrox sick either LOL. So I was curious when I saw the title "Sick Kiss". Great write.


    • Silent Hunter
      March 14
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      ha yeah. That's mainly the reason I wrote this. But the good thing is that neither of us is sick, anymore. lol


  • Heroesrox
    March 13

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    Aw. That's cute and funny! I hate it when your other is sick and you cannot help but kiss them and then you get sick too....LOL! It's torment! Great job! Retufn the favor!!!! (Comment my stuff.)

    • Silent Hunter
      March 13
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      Thanks. Yeah it is lol. But too bad I didn't get sick. It would have been special if I got sick due to her kiss Sure. I just got my hands on an entire week of freedom. I'll be reading soon!