I come to stand before you, naked except for three things... your collar around my neck, a rope tied and hanging around one wrist, and a blind fold holding my hair back on my head. You say nothing to me as you lean over and unzip a small bag. I don't know how, but I know that bag contains new toys, toys that I have not seen. It frightens me and excites me because while I trust you, I sometimes think you believe I can handle more then I think I can.
You sit back in your chair and motion for me to lean in closer. Your right hand comes up and reaches behind my head, and you pull me in for a slow soft kiss, your fingers gently entwining with my hair. You begin to kiss my chin, then my neck, still softly, and move over to my ear. You whisper "I love you baby girl." And with a sudden yank, you pull my head back, using the hair you so lovingly played with just moments before.
I let out a short gasp as my head snaps back, taken by surprise, and your mouth travels hungrily down my chest, seeking one of my hard nipples. You pull it into your mouth and suck on it hard and quick, and then bare your teeth as you bite it... not too hard at first. And you know this because of the noises I don't make, so you increase the pressure.
In my mind I think that maybe I should say something... I am afraid if I don't... you will think it doesn't hurt at all, and make it hurt more. As I think about this for only a second, you bite down harder as your lips wrap around it, again catching me off guard, and I cant help but cry out.
Still holding my hair tightly in your hand, you go back and forth between my breasts, kissing softly, and then biting.. never any rhythm to it... I can never know how long each will last, and every time the feeling changes, from one end of the spectrum to the far end of the other I am brought quickly into the sensation as though I never left.
I feel your hand reach between my legs, how is slides over my skin. I know I am wet and for a moment I don't understand why because I know this should make no sense... that pain should not do this to me. But my thoughts are cut short when your fingers slide between my lips and up inside of me, suddenly, forcefully. My legs open as my knees begin to buckle.
Author notes
This is Chapter 3 in a 11 part series, Sweet Release Denied, a collaboration between Master Luc Fhang and his submissive, Selestial.
"When one is denied something, they covet it. The pleasure is in the pain and the longer one is denied something the greater the appreciation when eventually received. Orgasm denial creates an erotic and painful mixture of emotion and physical sensation. A partner denied is often a partner to be satisfied. It feeds one's sexual hunger in ways that are difficult to elucidate, but once experienced there is no incertitude as to the pleasures to be had, time and time again." ~ Master Luc Fhang
Chapter 4 http://allpoetry.com/poem/5122737
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enjoyable
I am glad to find people after my own heart, keep up the good work I love it -
very tactile
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Twenty two views and just one comment! Tell me it isn't so?
Anyone can see from the title - which is a wonderful title - by the way - what the chapters in this story is all about. Why click on it to read and play with yourself while doing so - and then not tell the author (or authors) of these juicy pieces how much that you enjoyed them? I often get 20, 30, or more hits to my adult pieces that i CLEARLY LABEL for KINKY ADULTS ONLY - and get only 6 or 7 comments on most of them - or even less on occasion. Different strokes for different folks I always say BUT something tells me that nearly everyone who clicked on these pieces and didn't leave a comment were doing a little stroking to them. HE! HE! Go figure, Baby! Yet, another fine piece in this continuing story of SWEET RELEASE DENIED - and as your MASTER says in the authors comments - the longer one is forced or brought just one stroke or lick away from their orgasm the greater the reward will be in the end - as this naughty pet is well aware of.
Peace & Love!
Earl.
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No one has commented on this yet? People are curious and ashamed and read this in secret. I feel like I am watching a very erotic love story and will continue to watch!
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