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I Want You

 

 My Love:

 

Let me love you the rest of our lives

tell me you are mine, all mine

these lips that whisper your name

soft loving words from my heart

I want to feel you

your closeness in my nostrils

long as we are living

day and night I want

hold you with tender love

touching your soul

inside  heart that knows

know that I want you

that I love you

 

 

my passionate sensual woman

no one can make love happen

happen the way my heart desires

you can make love come true.

 

 

 

Mon Amour:

 

 

Permettez-moi de vous aimer le reste de nos vies
dites-moi que vous êtes les miens, tous le miens
ces lèvres qui chuchotent votre nom
mots d'amour mous de mon coeur
Je veux vous sentir
votre intimité dans mes narines
longtemps comme nous vivons
le jour et la nuit que je veux vous tiennent
tenez-vous avec l'amour tendre
aimez toucher votre âme
dans votre coeur vous savez
savez que je vous veux
savez que je vous aime

 

ma femme sensuelle passionnée
personne d'autre ne peut faire l'amour arrivent
arrivez la voie mes désirs du cœur
vous pouvez faire l'amour se matérialise

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

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  • Rose Angel gold member
    July 26

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    Bon Ami....I had never read this one ...but as I read it has the genuine words we know so well by your writes...So glad I read, and now as I realize you have returned ...Keep penning, and keep writing! Most romantic with your pen...


  • albymyheart gold member
    March 26

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    I must have missed this one...
    A lasting poem of love. Full of tender thoughts and sincere emotions. A sense of pure honesty is felt in your words. Just beautiful...alby


  • Viyanna Rosemarie silver member
    March 25

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    very well done. thank you for sharing this with me today and i am looking forward to reading more from you in the near future. viyanna rosemarie

  • poetrynovice
    March 25
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    Very Touching!

    Wish I could write sensual poetry such as this! Well done!


  • DarkHeartedLove
    March 25
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    ¨your closeness in my nostrils¨
    Im not sure if it was nessecairy but i liked your poem.


  • something.more
    March 25
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    astounding

    excellent writing, the French stanza really brought the love theme into play. Lovely poem


  • forbidden-colour
    March 25

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    Absolutly beautiful,
    I love the french stanza,
    it is the language of love afterall.

    Thank you for sharing, it was a pleasure to read.

    Regards!
    Sophie.




  • still.she.waits
    March 25
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    beautiful.


  • HeartTangles
    March 16
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    This is so beautiful in heart that I can only weep as I read it.


  • SoulTaker
    March 15

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    fantastico

    Bravo! Very deep and romantic sensual spiritual poetry. Hope to read more soon.
    p.s. check out my new poem and let me know a title for it, cause i am at a loss for the title.
    blessed be


  • nichtmich silver member
    March 10

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    A deeply romantic poem, I don't think a woman could resist! "I want to feel you, your closeness in my nostrils." That is beautiful. I suppose my only critique is that the poem is a little heavy on the words 'you' and 'know'. Just IMHO This is superb.


  • writebrain
    March 9

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    god, it's very sweet!

    i think every girl/woman would love for someone to write this to them...

    very, very pretty.


  • Kari gold member
    March 9

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    This is very sweet, and touching.
    I was wondering if on the first line :
    Let me love you rest of our lives
    did you mean
    Let me love you "The" rest of our lives
    Best of luck to you in the contest.

    Kari


  • Devine.identity
    March 9

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    well thats LOVE right there, in your own words and your own take on it all.
    I think that would be my explanation of love, if i felt ready enough to experience it. or accept it in my life.
    GREAT write, your really captured the feeling well


  • Debbie Hansman
    March 8

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    Beauty..from a heart with such love deep within that just pours out!...amazing words

    debbie


  • HeartTangles
    March 8
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    Exquisite and passionately penned.


  • Maedes
    March 8

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    You are so blessed for having such a beautiful love,
    touching not only heart but also soul, so deep ...;
    believe she will made her same vow for you

    success in your contest with such beautiful image also

    thanks for sharing this beautiful poem


    • Confusedboy
      March 8
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      your words fill the empty places of my heart with softness.
      Thank you for such confidence and caring words. I appreciate
      such soft encouragement.

  • Liquid memories
    March 7

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    terrific

    Great, in two languages also. to feel such deep emotions for another, touching depth of your soul, your heart is open wide for this love. may your heart`s desire come true for you.


  • XXWolfOfInsanityxX
    March 7

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    Wow, I really love this. this is written beautifully. the emotion is amazing and I really love the picture above as well


    • Confusedboy
      March 8
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      I am happy you have found delight here.
      It has made my day. Your visit was precious.


  • AnarchistXxXLove
    March 7

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    Wow an amazing write, beautifully written, such emotion, such love. Great write beautifully done . Good luck in this contest

    Brandon

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