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Through That Vest Of Lies

Through that shielded vest of lies,
And salty tasting tears-
Tell me why I see you everywhere.
(Please Baby, Enchant Me)

And Down beneath that crystal powder,
Eyes jagged with red lines-
Tell me why you mean so much to me.
(Please Baby, Scream At Me)

Behind that lost soul,
And broken smile-
Tell me how I shouldn't see you so pathetically...?
(Please Baby, Say Something)

Underneath those tattoo's,
And that chest puffed up with air-
Tell me why you're my weakness.
(Please Baby, I Need To Know)

Those walls are begining to crumble,
Far beyond your very existance...
Your death is like Runic Rhyme-
And getting close in time.

Please Baby, Enchant Me...
You've Got to be something through that vest of lies... ... ...

Author notes

Complicated Times In My Life.
Complicated Poems.
I Don't Even Know.

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  • Dalaney gold member
    March 31

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    this took my breath, held it, then squeezed very very tight...amazing write. i'm going to read more.