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Give Me a Thrill

Attack my bones,
Eat my flesh,
Dig your nails,
hold my breath.
Hold my breast,
mind and body rise.
Smile calmy,
as time shys.
Carry waves,
on the shore.
Caress me gently Darling,
endure  me more.
-Taylor Tucker

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