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hard floor



hard floor
soft back
comfort





A contest entry

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  • Swan song gold member
    March 7
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    This is really breif but a great take on the prompt

    thank you for your entry


    • bridgetjanejone
      March 8
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      Thank you for your kind comments and a Silver! I'm really chuffed. I like these haiku where there is a prompt as it really challenges me. I think sometimes people get too hung up with trying to write something complicated. My tip would be - simply LOOK at the picture and, keep it simple! I may hold a haiku competition myself soon.