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Face in the Mirror


Looking in the mirror I see a gullible man
Somebody whom is apt to believe/wants to believe
But the truth is its all one big con
the only spirit out there is Bacchus
and he is only 20% proof

so I take off my mask see the real me
and raise my glass to the freedom of reality
No more lies and deceit from a higher idol
No more worshiping lifeless heartless objects
For I can see the real face in the mirror

and there is no mystery just truth

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  • Draig aine gold member
    March 23
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    SHIVERS


  • LittleMoon silver member
    March 19
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    If this is your personal "truth" it is very well written. Sheila


  • iguana54
    March 10
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  • iguana54
    March 10
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    that rocks

    i know how you feel. my friend just doesn't care that much anymore. i'm a forgotten photo...

  • EXCELLENT!

    This is a great piece!! which flows well. I love the last line "and there is no mystery just truth " - more or less, eh?

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