Looking in the mirror I see a gullible man
Somebody whom is apt to believe/wants to believe
But the truth is its all one big con
the only spirit out there is Bacchus
and he is only 20% proof
so I take off my mask see the real me
and raise my glass to the freedom of reality
No more lies and deceit from a higher idol
No more worshiping lifeless heartless objects
For I can see the real face in the mirror
and there is no mystery just truth
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A contest entry
- Masks-Physical and Spiritual-Why we wear them? by SpiritMother.
1000 points, ended March 26, 24 entries
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If this is your personal "truth" it is very well written.
Sheila


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that rocks
i know how you feel. my friend just doesn't care that much anymore. i'm a forgotten photo... -
EXCELLENT!
This is a great piece!! which flows well. I love the last line "and there is no mystery just truth " - more or less, eh?

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