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Life is hard.

The pain and hurt stops while your gone,
what's going to happen when you return?
Will it all start again?
Would you hurt me again?

So far you've destroyed me,
what can be any worse?
You've broken my ribs,
made me wish to die,
hurt me so bad I even tried,
but that didn't work
because I got found too quickly.

You've damaged me,
broke me,
screwed up my life,
I have scars,
most by you
but some by me...

Now days the temptation is too hard
to resist the shining blade
that releases my pain,
it flows away
just like my blood,
everytime it drips,
another painful day vanishes,
I hurt no more,
I feel alive...

I admit it...
I'm worthless,
I'm a bitch,
I'm useless,
I'm everything you say I am,
so what's the point in my being here,
I hear a voice in my head,
telling me over and over
just reach for the blade,
just once more and let it all end.

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  • SoundsOfSilence
    March 16

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    Hmm... I do like the piece. I find it is more of a diary entry then a poem itself, but that is cool, because I write like that also. Do not think you are worthless or useless, or a bitch, because you can never lose hope in yourself, or nothing ever will have the chance to get better.
    Thank you for entering my contest, and if you ever need to talk to anyone, message me.

    ~~KitKat


  • The.poet.of.hearts
    March 11

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    Never Dare to Say, you are Useless

    Got it?

    by
    the poet of hearts and beautiful words


  • She burns
    March 7

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    Very painful here and touching here, so much tears and endless suffering...

    ...I hope you feel better soon


  • StarEyes
    March 7

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    Babygirl,

    This is heart wrenching.......

    You are NOT useless
    You are NOT a bitch
    You are NOT worthless!!!

    You ARE a very beautiful, wonderful, caring, loving young lady!

    You are my babygirl, and I would miss you beyond words if you were to succeed!

    I knew you would do great in this contest, but this rips the heart right out of me.

    Best of luck in this contest!

    and love

    Mommy


  • serenity silvermoon
    March 7

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    no sissy dont do it i will miss you momma and dadda will miss you to you can leave me remember what you told me you die i die i love you and i am always here if you need to talk you know that i love you please stay safe

    love your sister forever and always serenity silvermoon

  • luv2dream gold member
    March 7

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    "I admit it...
    I'm worthless,
    I'm a bitch,
    I'm useless,".....stop....no...you are beautiful and worth a lot!!...reverse those words no matter how difficult...you are very special!!


  • BrokenHeartsInVain
    March 7

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    I can really relate to the emotional stress in this piece. A little critisism, on the line ''You've broke my ribs'' it should be ''You've broken my ribs''. Also, it may do some good to add more details.
    Thank you for entering and good luck in the contest.

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