A rainbow oath
for the love he lost
as his hot blood
started to flow.
He's a red tie legend
with a guitar to match
his fiery persona
and fighting spirit.
On his road to glory
under a meteor shower,
he'll find the hope
hope to live his life.
Keep writing those
sweet moonlight poems,
Mister Mariachi,
don't stop.
Keep your gaze forward,
to the sky
and always be aware
of that distant tomorrow.
Author notes
Pic is from Shadow Hearts FTNW. Piece is about the guy in the pic, Ricardo.
The bold parts are names of his Serenata.
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I felt as if i was there! GREAT WRITE! VERY NICE JOB!
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Great work again! If I didn't already know that he was one of your favorites this piece would have!
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thank you for sharing this with me today. i like the format you used and am very glad to have read this. i am looking forward to reading more from you in the near future. viyanna rosemarie
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Excellent
A very fine write. For me personally, it reminded me of Johnny Cash, of whom you may of heard. Thanks for sharing. -
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Johnny Cash was awesome and I loved most of his music.
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Coools!!!
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Nice job with placing the names and the flow was great. You amaze me with everything you write...
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