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I love you though...



I tried to write
you a song,

but the words
just would not come,

so I thought
I would write
a poem for you,

though the words
got stuck in my mind-

So I decided
I would write you a letter,


and wouldn't you know it...

I can't find my pen and paper,

I love you though.







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  • lucky man or woman hpoe they know its a sweet write

  • xxbreexx
    March 31
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    I think this cute, too


  • lianna27
    March 10
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    its cute! i love it


  • SwaGGtastic
    March 9
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    This is very good i enjoyed it alot!

  • ktrenerow
    March 9
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    lol

    that was so cute

  • i loved this poem mommy is this one about him as well you know i love your poem but i love the ones about him the most your a great poet keep up the great work good luck in the contest

    i love you mommy - Love: your daughter serenity lynn silvermoon


  • poeticweaver gold member
    March 9
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    Beautiful....

    A very precious piece that shares your heart of love.

  • awwww that is beautiful, love it Nyetta

  • WOW...

    This is so sweet, I loved it... It is so sincere...

    Amazing write sis

    Lots of 's to you


  • penman gold member
    March 7
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    excellent

    Oh my the love sure does shine in this one. Great job. Thanks for sharing


  • Desire gold member
    March 7

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    OMG~

    This has me cracking up
    Love how You penned this one Beautiful~
    Brought a smile to my face~ and heck who needs to write down I Love You- it can be felt from the Heart
    Thank You for sharing Your Heart and Voice~
    Many blessings to You in all You do Sweet Soul
    Best wishes too
    with much love & light~ Desire~*~


  • poetmaster32
    March 7
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    sweet sentimental thoughts. nice.

  • Sweeeeet great poem mommy

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