my strings don't strum for nothing at all
my riffs have soul
while I sit and hum along
sounds of you
I breathe with the beat of the drum
I close my eyes
and dream another song
I dream, I dream
I dream, dream
and it all comes back to you
Author notes
mmm this isn't finished... This probably makes more sense when you hear it with the music.
In a list
A contest entry
- My Dreams of Love by Merciful-Manner.
1000 points, ended March 20, 15 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think ** This is not yet finished
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Love it
I love your style & thought patterns; they really appeal... another winner.... m-d
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very nice, i write songs too... this one has a nice feeling in it...PK
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you should allow me to collaborate with you sometime i bet i could be of some help
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short write
But it has it's nice touch in it with the drum and all. Thank you for entering my contest, best of luck to you in it!
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Well
Perhaps better with the music, as most songs are. But, this really seems to be music as it is. Has that nice music feel to it. Someday I'll really get to hear one of these songs. Tee hee.
Keep going and finish it out - then let me hear it.
Hugs!!
Grampa
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I can almost hear the music when i read it,
sounds good so far
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I like this. Its short but still. I dont think it needs the music
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