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You Wouldnt Surivive

live in my head
thinking and pondering
contemplating and shaking
fists clamped and cold
knees weak and legs stiff

thinking of torture to myself
torture of others who hurt me
torture of the pain inside,
torture of the thoughts in my mind,
making sense of this life


even i have planned my death
come up with destruction of my soul
chase away the demons in the depths
of the hole

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  • TragicFlaw
    March 7

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    I like the raw feel of this, however with some constant flow and vibe throughout. I enjoy this quite alot!