Time is drawing to a close-
spent- it is now gone-
wiped out for good-
Black and desolate
dredged up before
judgement-
wiping with circular movements
across memory-
trying to erase-
heart fighting to hold on-
it will never be lost-
never locked away-
-But-
held and cherished
till on the 'morrow
the lost is found
again...
Author notes
No idea folks
Please tell me what you think
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Clever
U always start your poetry off right at me.. i like that!

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Well
I think this one is about holding on to hope and light that shines for us even in the darkness, as one lovely quote says "All the darkness in the world can't extinguish the light of a single candle"

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Wonderful
Oh my your pen is sure on fire today. Another great write. So very well done. Thank you for sharing.

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Wow~
Now You mentioned You had noooooooooooooo idea about this piece
Another one to pull the Soul in closer- Excellent energy and this gives the Mind much to peruse- inhale for digestion~
Me like a lot - Oh Yes!!!!
Thank You for sharing Your Heart and Voice~
Many blessings to You in all You do Sweet Soul
Best wishes too
with much love & light~ Desire~*~


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I Loved it , you never cease to amaze me...
I am speechless, this poem is truly wild.... I loved it, it takes you on a role coaster ride... You loose yourself in this one sis...
Standing Ovations!!!!!
Lots of 's and love...
me

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awesome me like


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