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Remember our time togeher.

Remember when we used to chat all night, until the early hours
Remember all the wonderful plans we made, to be together forever
Remember the excitment as we counted down the days to our meeting
Remember the first kiss on Waverley Station, platform 11.
Remember the 6 red roses you gave me as we met.

Your smile was so warm, much warmer than on cam
Your touch was like an electric shock running through my body
Your kiss was warm and gentle
Your hand inviting me to hold, and walk with you
Your eyes told me you really did care.

The long drive back to Glencoe didnt seem to take that long
You pointing out all the places of interest along the way
Most of which I really didn't take in at all
I just wanted to look at you, touch you make sure you were real
Hamish kept trying to get between us... Do you Remember?

You cooked us a wonderful meal, a nice wine too
We sat eating, talking and laughing together my nerves all settled now.
You took my hand and lead me to the settee, again the electric ran through me
Sat sipping my wine, then you came closer, gently kissing me, whispering to me
Then it happened, we made sweet love, it was just like we said our first time would be

Ten wonderful days and nights we spent together, talking, laughing having fun
Ten wonderful days of telling each other how much we were in love
Ten wonderful romantic days and nights caressing, kissing making love
Ten wonderful nights making plans for the future, our forever
Ten wonderful days and nights together, and then it happened...

You told me I had to leave, I didnt understand why
You told me it was only for a little while, we would be together again soon
You told me you just needed time to sort things out
You told me you felt guilty, you had not waited long enough
You told me it was just for a little while, you would contact me soon

I didn't do it, I honestly didnt ring her, why wont you believe me
I didn't lie to you, I was honest through and through
I trusted you, you said you trusted me, but now I know you didnt
I wouidn't have told anyone of our special time together, please believe me
I cant believe the call yesterday, telling me you never loved me it was lies

My heart broke again, You told me you would never hurt me like he did
My tears will not stop, no matter how I try
My love for you wont turn off, my head is spinning what did I do wrong
My heart will break again later, you said you will be online to talk
My world has been so dark since you left me at Waverly station and said goodbye.


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  • forever changed
    November 7
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    WOW! This is amazing! Fantastic write,i can totally relate to this piece,it's beautiful - well done xxxx


  • Come L-oro
    March 9

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    oh how much ive missed your poetry, but this is so sad, beautifully writen though and truly written from your heart, great to see u online again
    love b3l