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Assembly Line

white noise
constant hum and rush of air
whirring fans and pumps
my sense of self fades
with each repetition
a thousand dittos a day
robot I

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  • sidewinder silver member
    October 3

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    funny what we think of when we hear common noises in our imagination!
    Interesting thoughts here!
    Keep penning on one stroke at a time!
    Bill