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Poetry on the Internet

The ebb and flow of time
passes all of us by
whether we pay attention
or not
and in the end
we all come to the same spot
by whatever route we have chosen.
Many years pass
momentarily
without even a flash
to give notice in the Universe
that someone has been here.
And yet the words remain
etched in cyberspace
in this world of our own making.
Only the emotions are real
and though they fade
they will always leave a trace.

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  • sidewinder silver member
    October 3

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    those little truth told within our writings...
    and at that they leave some wisdom!


    Again you have me thinking here my friend!
    Keep penning on one stroke at a time!
    Bill