Our words were always sung in tune
Just like the stars sing with the moon
A night that we never wanted to end
Once so in love, now just close friends
I think about you from time to time
Though I know no words or simple rhyme
can explain my thoughts, or how I feel
Wondering if this was ever real
Memories remain etched in my mind
of how you were so loving and kind
They always said true love never dies
In my case it's true but yours was lies
I'll never forget the first day we met
Our time together, I will never regret
Even to this day, I think we're meant to be
A love now lost, but not to me
Author notes
Ugh, I'm sorry for this, I know it's crap but I felt that I needed to write it.
Remove it if you want. 
A contest entry
- Okay so...I'm bored!! by poetsruletheworld.
1700 points, ended March 8, 9 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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thats really amazing!!!
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great job
The flow of this is beautifully written!! It sołnds as u dug deep to get this out!! Maybe jus a thought or maybe reality!! Either way it always makes u feel good to get it out and write it down!! Keep up the good work!! :-) look forward to reading more from u!!
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i broke the internets...my bad
but still i dont like this "playing the violin" vibe you got going on.
She's been dying, and ive been drinking...
and i am the rain king
is it about...a certain...M! b?
if you get that man i love you -
No way
That was great. I loved your poem. And for soooooo many poeple(sadly enough), its true. All the lies they tell, they shouldnt be able to. You did a great job. See the contest host didnt think it was crap either, you got an honorable winner trophy. You did a great job on this poem.
A.
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i dont like you sometimes. -
this better not be about who I think it is
YAY you rhymded I miss you rhyming I'm glad your getting back into it again. This write almost made me cry for obvious reasons. It was so heartfelt and dug into festering sores
Lovely write babes
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This flows really nicely and is definitely from the heart. You did a great job sticking to the rhyme scheme too.
Thanks for sharing this nice piece, and goot luck in the contest.
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No way am i removing this...it's a great write and i'm honored to have it my contest.
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