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I Deny Loves Existence

i am cold
down to my
cynical bones
lying here in
my broken bed
weeping

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  • PastelMoons gold member
    March 19

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    Oh my gosh
    you write with such
    raw, intense emotion
    your words are piercing
    so real so vulnerable
    you really move me!
    Thanks for sharing

    ~Pastel


  • Mistress Leala silver member
    March 8
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    Many times over I have done just that. Powerful words displayed.