Craving for the final release,
Bubbling lava about to burst forth.
Smouldering in erotic touch,
Leaving droplets on tender flesh.
Begging in dire need,
for the feeding of her soul.
Bringing her to life
in the surrender
of burning desire
as two melt into one.
In a list
A contest entry
- Pick a word - Write a poem in 10 LINES or Less (S) by The Fun House.
1050 points, ended March 21, 2009, 29 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
All comments are welcome!
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So good--So sweet--A treasured time between two lovers.
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A soft sensual piece. I like that it is tasteful and can easily see how it fits the prompt. A good job here.
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love this fire burning sensual poem its short but packed with the tensions, not overly graphic but desire filled enough to get the mind wandering and maybe the eyes a blushing
white
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thank you this was
the intent!
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WOW, this is a very smouldering write. Pretty darn good.
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molten
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LOL i was just reading this when you were reading it on the radio.. well done & good luck in the contest
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