Everything is fine, the war is going great
We must stamp out this country’s hate.
They have weapons leveled against this nation
We must go in and find these destroyer’s of liberation
Yes we are in debt, no we didn’t find any weapons to date
But they are still killing to spread their brand of hate
Stamp it out, we will to keep you safe and free
As sure as I’m your president, I’m here to protect your liberty.
A contest entry
- The Big 10 by lowercase prelude.
400 points, ended March 8, 12 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Comments
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I like this, very, hmmmm, patriotic i thought. Rhyme was good. I liked the style. x
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Truthfully, I think this could have been better without the rhyme, because it really sounds forced.
But it is a good take on the prompt, I will say that.
A unique one, anyway...
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