we are the only ones,
but i don't look into the
cracks to
find myself tangled into
waiting.
it begins to makes me
nervous
when i cant
feel my teeth across
the surface,
sign here please,
"i need my
thoughts back"
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very broken in its phrasing...and it has an effect on the way the reader perceives each line. Interesting, to say the least. I like the last few lines...even though I can't honestly say I understood most of what you were trying to convey here.
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