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untold story

.yeah, a story of mine.
.when one bestfriend fallen for her bestfriend.
.and i got nothing to do.
.because, yeah.
.i am only a bestfriend for him.


.i am trying to hold on.
.i am trying to smile.
.eventhough this is hurt so much.


.all i can see.
.in my eyes.
.him with her.
.with a teenage poser.
.and i.
.yeah, i am here.
.pray for him.
.smile for him.

.all i want for him now.
.he should live happier than me.

Author notes

this is story of my life.
this is no fun.
i am so sad about it.

well i think this one is weird, coz i pull out everything in my mind.
and this is the one i feel ryt now.
i am sorry.

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  • Captain Jenny
    March 29
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    I really love this write. Thanks for entering

    ~Lae

  • I understand where you come from. good write and good luck.

  • Aw, Roxy. This is so sad.
    And I know what this is like. It's hard and hurts a lot... I hope it all works out for you ^^


    Axel will always love you!

    ~Lae


    • mizerdrea
      March 7

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      thank you. . .

      this is my dark day. . .
      T_T

      thank God I still have you. . .
      ;]

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