I love you with every piece of my broken heart.
I need you more, with every inch of my forgotten soul.
I want you more, every minuet of my lonely life.
And i miss you more with every painful breath.
Your smile brightens my darkest days.
Your laugh such a beautiful sound!
I get lost every time i look in your eyes,
and i don't care if i am ever found.
Because you are the reason i live
i am here to make you happy.
I am your willing slave, for you have
captured my broken heart and made it whole again.
So its yours to keep. To hold close.
To feel its love when it seems pain is all you feel.
To hold close, to keep you warm on the coldest nights.
I am yours fully, my mind, my soul and my heart are yours to keep.
I am your willing slave. To do as you see fit.
To take the burden of your pain, your anger, and your tears.
You make me complete and whole again.
The one and only You are my love,
A contest entry
- love me in sign language... by Princess Derge.
650 points, ended August 5, 11 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Sooo?
Comments
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your word choice towards the beginning makes it sound cliched.
but this is a beautiful piece.
the message is really sweet and very loving...thoughtful.
nice write :] -
Absolutely beautiful. No other words can do this justice.
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awe i love this one =]
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Awww this is so sweet! Well done!
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