I see you as an angel flying above me.
My fondest dream is that someday you’ll love me.
Just seeing your face, lights up my life every day.
I’ll have your love for myself . I will find a way.
Angel, flying and dreaming.
Angel, so loving seeming.
Boy, you’re the angel I want by my side.
Come get me and take me with you for a ride.
I see you fluttering ‘round girls like they are flowers.
Each one will look into your eyes for hours and hours.
Suddenly you’re gone like you were never there.
They look dazed and confused; you don’t seem to care.
Sweetest of Angels, while you do all this flying,
and you whisper in eager young ears, are you lying?
Do you tell each one she’s the one who sets you dreaming?
Do you break tender young hearts, leaving them screaming?
I see you as an angel flying above me.
Will you ever land by my side and start to love me?
Just seeing your face, lights up my life every day.
I trust you to light up my night and not fly away.
Author notes
My Dreams of You
It is really hard for me to write this. To me it seems to belong to a much younger set of people who still think love is all you need to get by and if you love someone, they love and you will live happily ever after. Such naïveté.
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You did an excellent job with this brilliant masterpiece. I loved it. The meaning behind it and hope for true love is astounding. I'm glad I gave you the title I did, and I'm impressed with what you came up with. Keep up the excellent work and best of luck to you and your poem in this contest.
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Thank you for mentioning me honorably. I appreciate it.
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My first thought is that this girl is a TRUSTING FOOL. She says the 4th verse but doesn’t seem to hear what she’s saying. It’s like she is very young and can only see what she wants. If this were a real situation, CONSEQUENCES would eventually do her some damage. Good rhymes. Pretty smooth. OK by me.
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