The impact of a thousands fists on my stomach
I writhe in pain on the floor.
I can't make the world stop spinning.
The stillness of your eyes burns me inside,
I am freezing without you.
How did we get to this?
I sit entranced by my own shock,
and watch you walk out the door.
A rage builds inside me.
Running fast....anger....red.....something hard.
I pelt! I scream! I swear at the top of my lungs!
HOW COULD YOU LEAVE ME LIKE THIS?!!
I look down at your blood smeared face,
I am repulsed by you now.
Your skin burns mine.
You are not the man I loved,
you are the shell of that man.
I can't believe what you've become.
I can't believe you're with someone....
......else.
A contest entry
- Can this be happening? by ciara12.
1350 points, ended March 9, 16 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Comments
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oh my god! i love this one so much i really don't know what to say.. i'm just so sshocked that put this much emotion in this and i realize how bad things can get in a relationship but you put it to the extremes and i don't know what to say! amazing write..
thanks for entering
MIss Ciara Ann Sparks -
two thumbs up!!!!!!!!!!!!!
love the last line!
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