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shadows and memories

A flash of light
And my mind explodes with thought
For with every light
Comes shadow
And with these shadows, memories
Memories of a time when we were together
And I could still say
“I love you” without wincing

I long to go back
To that time in our lives
When everything was better

The light disappears
Along with the memory
And I fall into a relieved respite
But I still remember
I will always remember

The way you talked to me
The way you touched me
The feeling of your lips against mine
And I will forever with to return
To the time when I could say it
The time when I could mean it

I love you

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  • ciara12
    March 9

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    this is really really good and i like it alot.... great symbolism and it flowed so well
    thanks for entering
    love
    Ciara Ann