Questions
Do I wear black for a broken dream,
Or is it best suited for a broken heart?
What color describes a silent scream?
Do I wear black for a broken dream?
What kaleidoscope unfolds life's lifelong scheme?
What brush strokes paint death's telltale chart?
Do I wear black for a broken dream,
Or is it best suited for a broken heart?
A contest entry
- Question it, poems by Poetess12.
700 points, ended March 8, 15 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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Ah dear one, sweet auntie Deone, you penned it with the sweetness of your heart and spirit! Ah I was just flying through people's author pages who were my favorites on this community. Indeed you're a favorite and I won't be tired of reading such good poetry. The imaginary were all limpid. I'm sure it was a special style; I always learn new things about poetry from your poetry.
Thank you, dear, for sharing your poetry with us
~Massy~
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I believe black is suited to anything broken. Dreams, hearts....
If this means what I think it may... then I am sorry...
The repetition helped reinforce the idea...A great write. -
I like how you worded your poem. It has some interesting questions. It is a good write.
Thank you for your entry.
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