It doesn't matter what you say or do,
But you lie again and again!
I love you.
WHY?!?!?!?!?
Its hurts every time you text or call,
I can't see or hold you in my arms!
But it doesn't matter.
I love you!
WHY?!?!?!?!?
I cry when no one is watching,
and die when no one hears.
Does it matter?
I love you
People do many things for love.
WHY?!?!?!?!?!?
A contest entry
- True Emotion by Night Terrors.
400 points, ended November 15, 53 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Sad, Upset, Hurt, Betrayed? by starving4perfection.
1550 points, ended April 26, 157 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
How was the ending. I feel It went kinda weak...
Comments
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Liars are jerks. And not worth the time of day. Chances are if you're lying to others, you're lying to yourself as well in some area.
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this poem is very straight forward and true. =]
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A very nice poem. Love can be as cold as hate sometimes. You just have to work at it. It doesn't come naturally to anyone.
The Positives:
A very unique style with a great flow. I like the rhythm as well.
The Negatives:
None really this was pretty straight forward.
My favorite part:
Its hurts every time you text or call,
I can't see or hold you in my arms!
But it doesn't matter.
I love you!
WHY?!?!?!?!?
I like this part because I think it shows the most emotion. Thanks again for entering.
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