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Question #1

signs to direct
timed to perfect
what you least expect
    ...routes to select
image when stunning
pictured when cunning
livid while running
    ...cogs are turning


(unfinished)

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its sort ove a riddle hope you know your x's and y's

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  • Veronica Leigh
    March 7

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    Beautifully done as always. I've always been jealous of your writing abilities.

    Again, beautiful job.