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The Art of Revenge (Tachism)

steel hooves oppress the dust underfoot
hollowed-out mockery of a beast of burden
bearing its similarly void-hallowed master in blood-scented silence
corpse-breath obscures the air, fly-buzzing symphonies to please
the rider's serrated ears.

burnt shells of hundred-year oaks tremble in fearful nausea
before vomiting forth a war-pack of lunatics,
monsters sanctified in moon-madness to the damp soil
painting their Mother Earth's skin with predatory tachism:
thus did She take Her taloned vengeance.

Author notes

I go back and forth between 'taloned' and 'tachism' as the base prompt for this entry. To be honest it's really both.

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  • The Fun House silver member
    March 21

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    I found this piece to be both captivating and deep; it riveted me and sort of took me into it's fold quite unwillingly and yet I have enjoyed the ride.