She taps her cigarette
dropping ash-like shame.
Her fears of what she could be
sadly, are what she became
Watching the kids from school,
at lunch time, as they give her judgemental glances.
Watching the world go by...
she gives herself no chances
She is the biggest loner and
I think everyone now knows,
She doesn't care, she likes being alone
she ditches class, not sure where to go
She is so numb, her eyes seem so cold
no one dares approach her,
she need not a person to hold
The dark pools of grey, that are her eyes
Mirror and reflect a world deaf to her cries
~Madison~
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This was beautiful, moving, powerful, and many other positive adjectives that apply.
I loved this poem, it actually made me cry. It has such a ring of truth to it.
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thank you so much for your applause and kind comment. i am somewhat shocked you found it to be that great and thrilled at the same time! thanks for reading.
~Madison~
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wow, this was an amazing write, just really great. I liked it. It seemed somewhat sad in a way, to always be alone and never know were to go. But if it works, go with it right? Again, I realy liked it, it had some good imagery. Keep the pen flowing and I hope all is well
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thank you so much for your kind words on my most recent poem.
~Madison~
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