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you stopped me

Burning your image into my eyes,
you tap your feet
like the quite kid on a school bus.
Building up my resumé as your lover.
I start to bob my head,
slow as a ghost rode tree swing.
My nose grows heavy and magnetic,
pulling me to your eyes.
They look upward and pluck out my tongue.
leaving me speechless.
As i trip over the words to say,
you stare on threw my bangs.
I allow the words to rest in my chest.

They will stay there.

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just happens every time.

have you ever been?

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