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Out of Date

I do not want to hide,
the cause of my ill fate,
My stars are out of frame,
My God is out of date.

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  • Anybodys-guess
    March 13

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    Humorous...we all want to hide sometimes and other times want to be visible, but I can get the gist of this. Nice work. Later, AG


  • Ice-cream Emporer
    March 6
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    Very well written...
    Very thoughtful
    Religion does seem to fade in and out of importance


  • Finntheirishflea
    March 6
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    hmm

    very thought provoking good job!


  • DogFish silver member
    March 6
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    Gods go in and out of fashon...


  • crimson-river
    March 6

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    Haha

    I got a sense of humor for some reason when I read this poem.
    My God is out of date...creative...and yet for some people a little true...I think that is true of me actually...I don't really practice a faith so I guess that sort of can fit your description...

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