Who knows how to love you?
Unconditionally
When will you stop being afraid?
Open your heart and let me love you
Let me show you how it feels to give love
a chance
I've had my doubts
cheated on
lied to
Been through the storm
let me ease your pain
Show you a new way of life
happiniess, freedom, love and hope
Why oh Why stop living in the past
Fuck You
I'm not that selfish bitch
I didn't hurt you like she did
Trying to show you something new
and yet you still look confused
Look at me when I'm talking to you
FUCK
I can't believe you
my emotion are raw and real
this is how you treat me?
Take a bow.....clap clap clap
Your show is over
I'm tired of making a fool of me
Just so you can watch, sit and stare.............................to be continued
A contest entry
- Write me a poem. by Frodofan.
400 points, ended March 6, 20 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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too thumb up
you still got it
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A confused piece.
You certainly go from love to hate quickly. Honestly, if it your feelings can change so quickly, it cant' be love at all.
Thanks for taking the time to enter.
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The point I was trying to make with this piece was a woman loving a man that was hurt by his ex she never said she hated him she was just tired of him comparing their situtation to the past so there was no hate at all.....
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