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WEAK you say....lol

If I had a bomb
would you be weak?

Would you continue to be drained?
I'm going to make this short and sweet

One life to live
So get up
Get out and try something

Some people wish they could get up
Paralyzed from the waist down

But you consider yourself to be drained and weak
When some people wish they could see

This is crazy
I'm not going to throw you a pity party
I dont people you

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  • umm.....haha..."I dont people you"? hehe, sorry i'm a bit confused.

    and this wasnt very uplifting, it made me laugh though. nd if you threw a bomb, i doubt a person would be drained, a bomb is excitement.lol


    thanks..and good luck
    Stephanie ♥


    • cali951
      March 9
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      I made a typo I dont pity you...I was thinking pity but put people lol