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Not forever

I'm afraid this isn't going to last forever.
Someday you will go away and so will I.
No, I'm afraid we don't quite know where
though some say they do.  Some say
we will be together again,
some day.  Here's hoping

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That's all I could come up with. I remember when my mom had to tell me when I was 10 or so. Some old folks across the road had died and it set me thinking.

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  • crimsondew
    March 6
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    When you are young such things go really hard on mind....

    • Judith Chandler
      March 7
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      My mom told the truth, as I tried to tell in the poem. What else to do? Actually, I thought about it a lot as a teenager, maybe not healthy, but I was the sensitive, poetic type even then.

      Hope you are well.
      J.