while working in the lab
we tried to disect
a grey and pink mouse
the very look of it
creeped me out
it took my soul out of me
and the thought of taking
out its intestines and brains
took my brains away
it might have been my disection
seriously no jokes
with us working was
also grade 8th
experimenting helium,
oxygen and nitrogen
my friend collected her guts
and took hold of her knife
when the mouse woke up
'YIKES'.....
'I THOUGHT IT WAS DEAD!'
SCREAMS filled the lab
the mouse ran up
all the girls shrieked
he ran and stopped on the helium tube
'dont!!!!' shouted the lab assistant
and several others
but the mouse was as obstinate
as my brother
and he put his mouth to it
and up he swelled out
like a balloon
sold on oak pine street
and then he looked like
my uncle burt
(SERIOUSLY HIS BELLY
IS BIGGER THAN HIMSELF)
it blew up more
and more and it seemed itll bust
but it didnt
it lost control of the tube
and went up
'SAVE THAT MOUSE!'
'ITS FOR DISECTION!'
but the mouse went out the window
(bless the ones who opened it,
who opens windows in labs?'
SERIOUSLY!!!!!!!!
well we lost
and that is the story
of the flying mouse!
Author notes
the option which said its suppsed to be funny...Option 8
A contest entry
- Lots of fun and options by pop123.
750 points, ended March 29, 21 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
is it funny?i am positive it isnt!
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Yea, why cant a Pakistani girl right well?
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You write well for a 12 year old Pakistani girl. And Look! You’re a finalist. I wish you the very best of luck in tis contest.
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I was indicating that I cared enough about the poets work to check out her home page.
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why cant a 'PAKISTANI' girl write good?Whats with all the 'view'.that was very annoying,Anyway thanks alot for the applause and appreciation.
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AWESOME! I love it. But what option number did you use?
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Lol
This is funny!
'He-he' I think i would do things different if i was that mouse.LOL anyway lovely poem, great imagination! Well done!
-Lana-
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