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Like a Flower in Spring

Lovely as a spring flower she
always finds her way. Sometimes blooming
uninvitedly in someone elses day.
Reality doesn't bother her. She knows
everything she is, so don't even bother
needing her to bloom elsewhere for your unwillingness to
avert your eyes from convention's thought; to
maybe show you have a heart. She's here
because you've lost your way. Open your
eyes to this spring flower; see her beauty from
root to stunning rose!
Realize the greatness of love;
of opening your heart to everyone; not just
society's choice of who you should love.
Embrace diversity!

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  • Tqop
    March 13
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    Amazing job.

    Very lovely. It's very beautiful. I love the ending. It has a nice flow to it.


  • Nickelspring gold member
    March 6

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    Oooh, I love acrostics, this one especially!
    You've done a stunning job of portraying yourself and a message as well.
    Loved "see her beauty from
    root to stunning rose!"
    Awsome chick!
    KW~

  • lovely-bones
    March 6
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    It showed the blooming beauty of her. It was represented well. I love it.