Where ever you go ...
I just want you to know.
That you will always have a place in my heart.
True that it is hard to love so strongly then to let go.
Looking back I can see that your best interest was also mine.
That the whole thing -was not just a waste of time.
Learning to draw upon my inner self, without destroying the delicate balance of my life.
Change has been good, it has been wonderful.
Though you will never read this. I am no longer angry with you. In fact I would like to thank you one day, some day I will.
I will return the reminants of you still left behind...
Just like our favorite song ...you still linger here.
Author notes
Moving on...
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A contest entry
- At last I am free by Angelo di Luce.
480 points, ended July 23, 11 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Evanescence Songs by BrokenAtBest.
400 points, ended October 23, 16 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Thanks for entering. The line " I will return the remnants of you still left behind..."
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Thank You For The Gold
I know that judging is a difficult task, congratulations to all of the winners.
I am actually humbled by winning gold for this write, as it wrote it's self from my heart and through my tears. Thank you.
God Bless and Keep You,
Cheryl -
It takes a loving heart to write such words smoothing the pain she felt once
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I love the photo on your page of the powder white beauty
Is she your feline?
Thank you again for awarding me the gold.
Sincerely,
Cheryl -
Thank you for the honor of placing this poem in the gold ,,, it was a very open write.
one that still to this day I hold dear ...thank you for recognizing a inner meaning deeper than I even knew. I just wanted to let you know how much your actions meant to me. Again , thank you Sir Angelo di Luce.
Sincerely, Cheryl
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wonderful
The poetry of forgiveness releases us inot the light again...
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Very good!
Emotionally moving and thought provoking. You show your feelings well, turning them into something lovely and heartfelt. I love this one
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I love this poem and I could relate to this strongly at one point. Love the closing line "Just like our favorite song ...you still linger here"
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Thank you for reading and commenting.
I have moved on out of the deep wallow of self pity and into limbo land...still trying to find my way. Your comment is important to me.
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Where ever you go opens such a whole world ..Learning to draw upon my inner self some of my favorite parts in this poem.. so touching and strong..love it Hugs Angel♥
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Thank you so much for the read and comments
When I wrote this I had come to the realization - I was over it.
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Excellent
I outta slap myself for not coming to your page sooner! What the hell was I thinking? This is awesome stuff. You are now a favorite of mine and this poem is bookmarked forever!!!!!!! This is so strong and the attitude in it is so much like where I would love to be in my own life. Oh boy I am getting there, but everytime I let my guard down here comes someone else looking to destroy an already broken heart....ok ok I'm done...good job!
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Okay...you have just blown me away!
Thank you for your kind and generous comments. You have done wonders for my ego ...I now have a big head. I loved your comments - I am glowing.
Thank you for reading me and commenting. I am honored.
Sincerely,
Cheryl
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what a loving and pleasant poem. and so sad at the same time. a wistful and imaginative piece. relaly like the picture that went with it too. well done. Emmy
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Thank you Very Much!
I am humbled by your kind words to some one like me.
Thank you for reading and commenting.
Sincerely,
Cheryl
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I think this is one of the most beautiful poems I've come across on here. It's so heartfelt.
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Thank You for saying so...you are most considerate.
This was from my heart, thank you again for reading me and commenting. It means alot to me.
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