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Pier 101

Waves rise
and fall,
lightning striking
the crests,
sending fish
into a frenzy,
their bodies frying.

Yet none
of this matters
to her.

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  • etoile
    March 6

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    great take on the picture.
    i like the ending a lot and the imagery is really nice too.

    thanks for entering


  • Angelflower
    March 6

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    This was a sad write, at least to me, but there are many different images in this write.. I really enjoyed reading it .. thanks much for sharing! best of luck in the contest!

    Angel