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The Satchel Stick

The satchel hero.
The stick rise out.
The string is black from volcano blast.
Over the dirt walls, the pipe flies.
The stick returns and lands in the satchel.
We begin to run.
Then the satchel captures the blast.




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  • AliceinPoetryLand gold member
    March 8

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    An interesting entry, but I would really like this explained to me. It's probably me, but I don't really understand this.
    Thank you for the entry though
    Gaylene