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A deathly warmth

Lay down within my arms
and feel my warmth
For this is where you have come from
Be not afraid as I have followed you from birth

I am the only destination of your given path
and all that walk among the living
....one day visit me
The young, the old
The inbetween

You need not fear me for I have always
been with you
sometimes at a distance
sometimes too closely
Never the less
I will great you with open arms
and you will feel my warmth

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