Delicate beauty concealing etheral secrets
Gently craddled within violaceous flesh
Painted by natures graceful kiss
Protective petals nurture infinite gifts
Silverly glow of full moons melody
Devotedly serenades a regal bloom
Enchanting entities of heaven incarnate
Instinctively join in an angels chorus
Harmonious breeze of a magical night
Tentatively carry the radiant essence
Gracing earth with illuminate benevolence
of spiritual splendor.
Author notes
Knickerdew
A contest entry
- POETRY PODCAST - Showcasing your work. by Thom Boulton.
700 points, ended April 1, 63 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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amazing,im sorry if i sound like a broken record but your poetry leaves me in awe.
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omg!! that picture is soooo beautiful!! love it!...you won't by chance have the ilnk? anyways...lovely poem..I do believe you did justice to the pictures..words that just whisper of beauty..a sigh..on a "magical night"..a breeze..joined by "angels chorus"...wonderful
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Thank you
I don't have the link anymore... I just cleaned the old links outta my computer about a week ago... sorry...
Thanks so much for th read and if you aren't getting the points for the "rate this comment" let me know please cuz something is messed up with either AP or maybe my computer or maybe both????
Anyway thanx again sweetz and I'll ttyl
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Stunning piece of writing that really took me away to somewhere else. I really did love this. Wonderful imagery here. Keep writing.
Dark Wishes
Wayne Leon
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Thanx Dark One
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I really love the feel of this poem. the flow was great and it gives a since of peace wonderful work thanks for reading one of my poems that means a lot sorry it took some itme to get back to you with my job I get on when I can again this was really good SH
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Thankx for the comment and taking the time out to read this.
Please don't apologize, I get it lol...
I really don't expect a comment back when I comment on anothers poetry, I enjoy reading others poems as it often gives me inspiration.
So it was my pleasure and your absolutely welcome
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This is really beautiful. I definitely think you should definitely write more "light" poetry. The picture is a nice complement as well.
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Thank you, I was a bit apprehensive about it and of the mind that it doesn't has a flow to it but I appreciate your comment and will take your advice.
Thanx much!
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Ahhhhh! I CAN SMELL THE FLOWER UPON THE BREEZE!!!!
I can actually close my eyes and see this and also smell the flowers sweet aroma floating softly upon the evening breeze!
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Wonderful! As you know I am usually writing from pain and grief so this is a new adventure for me, I am so happy that you like it!
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Woah wonderfully crafted verse with very powerful imagery and emotion yet delicate in its delivery
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Thank you! This "lighter" type of writing is pretty new to me so it took it me a while LOL.
I'm honored you took te time to read and comment
Thank you again.
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