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The Devil and The Darkness

The light that fills my lonely cell,
Is blocked out by the key,
That locks the door to this hell,
The place they wanted me.
Time's racing like the wind,
The Executioner is near,
Of his bloodstained hands,
I have no fear.
I recall that night,
My every breath,
And, step along the way.
Closed my eyes, walking,
As danger paved the way.
The devil, and the darkness
The final stop for me.

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  • fillurhands
    March 7

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    This is a very heavy piece of work young man. I like it. You have captured the essence of a truth and darkness that I have no doubt is very real for many. Very good work!